1. "Then, my father, he often takes out the rubbish and waters the plants."
- Ở đây chủ ngữ "he" thừa trong câu nhé.
=> Em có thể viết như này luôn : "Then, my father takes out the rubbish and waters the plants."

2. "Next, is my young brother, he normally sweeps the floor and hang up the laundry."

- hang chuyển thành hangs nhé, my brother là ngôi số ít nè
- cũng giống như câu trên, em không nên cho thêm chủ ngữ "he" nhé,
=> câu sửa sẽ như sau : "Next, my young brother normally sweeps the floor and hangs up the laundry."

3. "And about me, my regular housework is mop the floor and washes the dishes."
- Ở đây chủ ngữ là my regular housework, nhưng đây đúng hơn là một danh từ, không thể hành động như con người. Nên các động từ như mop, wash em sẽ thêm to phía trước thành to mop, to wash. -
=>Câu đã sửa : "And about me, my regular housework is to mop the floor and wash the dishes."

4. "Finally, on every weekend Sunday, my family will often do different entertainment activities together such as sing, watch TV, read books or cycle to the beach."

- Trạng ngữ on every weekend Sunday của em nên chuyển thành every Sunday ( Sunday có thể hiểu là cuối tuần rồi)
=> Câu sửa : "Finally, every Sunday, my family will often do different entertainment activities together such as singing, watching TV, reading books, or cycling to the beach."

=> Cả bài sau khi sửa sẽ được một đoạn như này :
First about my mother, she usually shops for groceries and cooks. Then, my father often takes out the rubbish and waters the plants. Next, my young brother normally sweeps the floor and hangs up the laundry. And about me, my regular housework is to mop the floor and wash the dishes. As for laundry, my family often uses a washing machine, so it is a common job for each family member to put their own clothes into the washing machine. Finally, every Sunday, my family will often do different entertainment activities together such as singing, watching TV, reading books, or cycling to the beach. And that's what I want to tell you about my family life.

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