Hello class, Hello ms.Lan My name is Anh. I'm 14 year old. I'm in class 8a3 from BM secondary school. I live in..... My favorite is listening to music. my family have 3 people. okay, let's go to the problem of environmental pollution developing economes they have a serious environmental impact. water soarces are most severely affected. some factories are built leading to a huge amount of waste that needs to be treated. because many factories lack wastewater treatment systems most of it will be discharged into rivers anh lakes. oil spill accidents also contribute to environmental pollution killing thousands of marine animals the act of dumping garbage into rivers and lakes creates conditions for organisms and bacteria to drow. they are spreading through polluted water and affecting human health. to solve the problem, there should be a praper waste disposal system. raising awareness of people is also important sửa lỗi và viết lại những lỗi nào sai ngữ pháp chổ nào ko đúng hộ em vs ạ

ms→Ms

Lan thiếu dấu cách

year→years

from→at

soarces→sources

economes→economies

they have→that have

anh→and

praper→proper

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Hello class, Hello Ms.Lan My name is Anh. I'm 14 years old. I'm in class 8a3 at BM secondary school. I live in..... My favorite is listening to music. My family has 3 people. okay, let's go to the problem of environmental pollution developing economies have a serious environmental impact. water sources are most severely affected. some factories are built leading to a huge amount of waste that needs to be treated. because many factories lack wastewater treatment systems most of it will be discharged into rivers and lakes. oil spill accidents also contribute to environmental pollution killing thousands of marine animals the act of dumping garbage into rivers and lakes creates conditions for organisms and bacteria to drow. they are spreading through polluted water and affecting human health. to solve the problem, there should be a proper waste disposal system. raising awareness of people is also important

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