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I live in a surburb of HCM city. Its (ban dat ten) town. Its about 5 kilometres from the city centre. Tourists and local people often use bus to get there because its the fastest way to travel. It takes them about 30 minutes. Its large and beautiful. In the evening, it surrounding by a lot of people who are hanging out with their families or friends. The local people are friendly and helpful. They always help me when I need. In my hometown, most of people love being a teacher as they will earn a high salary. According to my opinion, it is the best place Ive ever known. It contains my memories, my childhood and its life quality is one of the best reasons I love living there.

Neu co lo sai cho nao thi cho minh xin loi nhe