The first day I went to visit Taktsang monastery the holiest place in Bhutan. Here I see many beautiful caves and especially elaborate Bodhisattva. On the second day, I visited the Motithang Takin reserve. Here I got to see a lot of wild animals especially Takin and I took a lot of beautiful pictures here. On the third day, I to go sightseeing Thimphu. Here I took pictures, participated in archery (at Stadium Changlimithang), ate local food. ( Mọi người nhận xét và góp ý bài writting của em với ạ )

`Answer:`

- Dòng đầu tiên chỗ "The fist day" `->` "On the fist day"

- Sau chỗ "On the fist day" thêm dấu phẩy

- Chỗ "On the third day, I to go sightseeing Thimphu" `->` "On the third day, I went sightseeing in Thimphu"

- Đoạn cuối chỗ "ate local food" `->` "and ate local food."

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`**` Bài viết hoàn chỉnh:

On the first day, I went to visit Taktsang monastery the holiest place in Bhutan. Here I see many beautiful caves and especially elaborate Bodhisattva. On the second day, I visited the Motithang Takin reserve. Here I got to see a lot of wild animals, especially Takin and I took a lot of beautiful pictures here. On the third day, I went sightseeing in Thimphu. Here I took pictures, participated in archery (at Stadium Changlimithang), and ate local food.

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`**` Không hiểu hoặc cần thêm thông tin hay bản dịch thì nói mình nhé :3