Sửa lỗi nếu có My favourite sport is badminton. I started my hobby 10 years ago .I often share my hobby with my father. My father sometime teaches me to learn how to play badminton well. I often practice playing badminton with him after school. And there are some reasons why I like it. First, I find playing badminton interesting and it helps me more strong and confident, It makes me feel energetic everyday. Besides, I can make many friends when I play badminton. We can improve our skills through discussion and practice. In addition, we can talk about many interesting things when we rest. Finally, playing badminton reduces the chance of getting hurt. To sum up, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but also mentally as well. And I usually play at least once or twice a week. In the future I will continue this hobby.

My favourite sport is badminton. I started my hobby 10 years ago. I often share my hobby with my father. My father sometime teaches me to learn how to play badminton well. I often practice playing badminton with him after school. And there are some reasons why I like it. First, I find playing badminton interesting and it helps me more strong and confident, It makes me feel energetic everyday. Besides, I can make many friends when I play badminton. We can improve our skills through discussion and practice. In addition, we can talk about many interesting things when we rest. Finally, playing badminton reduces the chance of getting hurt. To sum up, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but also mentally as well. And I usually play at least once or twice a week. In the future I will continue this hobby.

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`**` Sometime `->` Sometimes

`**` Confident `->` More confident (Theo cấu trúc "The more + ... + the more +...")

`**` Everyday `->` Every day (Do everyday = là thông thường, còn every day = mỗi ngày)

`**` Thêm dấu phẩy đằng sau câu "In the future"

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