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+)Bỏ chỗ"because I want a younger sister." vì thừa nha bn.
+)"Both have jobs while my brother is old and he is studying in Can Tho city."Câu này chia ko đúng thì và cũng có đôi chỗ sai nên lược bỏ hoặc sửa lại cx đc.
=>Both of my parents are already jobs and my brother is studying in Can Tho city.
+)"My family likes to watch TV together at night and since then, I can have the opportunity to know more about my parents and that makes me love them more and more."bỏ and more
+)"I'm a sports person so I like swimming, badminton or basketball and I'm good at badminton and swimming so I take the time to practice them" tham khảo câu sửa
=>I'm a sporty boy so I like swimming,badminton or basketball and I'm good at playing badminton and swimming so I usually take time to practice them.
Đó là những lỗi sai n!(HỌC TỐT!)
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Hi everyone, you can call me Thi and I'm 13 years old. I am currently studying at Quang Tien high school and I live in Sam Son city. I live in a happy family. My family has 4 people. Yes: my father, my mother, my brother and me. But I will soon have a younger sister and I have been waiting for this moment for a long time because I want a younger sister. My father is 45 years old and my mother is 37. Both have jobs while my brother is old and he is studying in Can Tho city. My family likes to watch TV together at night and since then, I can have the opportunity to know more about my parents and that makes me love them more and more. I'm a sports person so I like swimming, badminton or basketball and I'm good at badminton and swimming so I take the time to practice them. I often listen to music especially when I feel sad and lonely.
BẠN LÀM ĐÚNG HẾT RỒI ĐÓ!!!!
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Both have jobs while my brother is old and he is studying in Can Tho city."Câu này chia ko đúng thì và cũng có đôi chỗ sai nên lược bỏ hoặc sửa lại cx đc.
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