Dear Sir/ Madam, 1. I / like/ express/ concern/ increasing/number/Karaoke bars/city. => 2. There /be/lot/reasons/I/object/places. => 3.Firstly/owners/take/much money/those/come/sing. ==> 4.Secondly,they/cause/much noise/neighborhood => 5. Thirdly, there/number/pupils/play truant/just/go/those/places/sing => 6.Last/least/these bars/do harm/appearance/city/because/their/ugly flashing lights => 7.I/want/say/I/not/old fashioned/ person => 8. I / hope/authority/take/matter/careful consideration. => 9. I/ not mean/ban/them/but/there/should/effective way control/this kind/entertainment places => 10. I/look/see/city council/do/this matter =>

1., I would like to express my concern about an increasing number of karaoke bars in the city.

2. There are a lot of reasons that I object to these places

3. Firstly, the owners take too much money from those who come / coming to sing.

4. Secondly, they cause too much noise to the neighborhood.

5. Thirdly, there are a number of pupils who play / playing truant just to go to those places to sing.

6. Last but not least, these bars do harm to the appearance of the / this city because of their too ugly flashing lights.

7. I want to say I am not an old-fashioned person.

8. I hope the authority will taker the / this matter into careful consideration.

9. I do not mean to ban them but there should be an effective way to control this kind of entertainment places.

10. I look forward to seeing the city council do something about this matter.